PLAGIARISM EXERCISE for COMM2

For me, the revisions of student 1 is guilty of plagiarism mainly because he/she had copied the idea from the sources without acknowledging the sources and assuming it as his/her own work. 

To correct it:

• The student must learn to  write on his own words.
•  He/she must acknowledge the rightful sources where he/she got the ideas.

The revision of student 2 is not guilty of plagiarism since he/she had acknowledged the author and did not assume it as his/her own. But still, he/she should learn how to rephrase the work of others not just copying it all the way.